narrative writing

Once Upon a time there was this boy called
timothy. Timothy went on a magical book that
he had never ever been in his life, later that
day he was scared that he might hurt someone
so the magical book took timothy on an
adventure. Timothy was looking high up in the
sky looking for stars, timothy said”wow this
looks amazing”he said , he also said I could
see everything from up here it was his
birthday so he said” this is the best birthday
present ever.